Annoying ways people use sources

The annoyance- too many quotations in a row

The example- "No one makes me bleed my own blood (Dodgeball 2004)" oh yeah? "If you can dodge a wrench, you can dodge a ball.(Dodgeball 2004)" "Ouchtown, population: you bro!(Dodgeball 2004)" How was that? "I just threw up in my mouth a little bit (Dodgeball 2004)."

The Fix- go through the quotes and make sure they are relevant to the subject and add to them to break up if necessary

"No one makes me bleed my own blood (Dodgeball 2004)" Said White. Well is that is the case we should try practice with this. "If you can dodge a wrench, you can dodge a ball.(Dodgeball 2004)" looks like you need to work on your dodging because you just got sent to "Ouchtown, population: you bro!(Dodgeball 2004)" Maybe we should try something else Kate is not looking so good. Kate are you alright? "I just threw up in my mouth a little bit (Dodgeball 2004)."

Thurber, R. M. (2004). Dodgeball. Twentieth Century Fox.